Review Detail of svrakkin in Absolute Ability

The plot of the book itself is interesting enough to make you stay and read what'll happen next. However, there are a lot of grammatical errors that take away the enjoyment of reading such an unpolished gem of a book. Some of the descriptions are also lacking in some aspects. For example, it would've been nice to read a small blurb of Ryan's life before his reincarnation, that can make us readers invest emotionally into this character. You can show what kind of man he was before, then walk us through how different he will be in his new life. Like I said, this is an unpolished gem of a book. It can improve with a bit of editing and proofreading.