all the changes start from chapter 8/9 with an overhaul of character designs. i pulled the other chapters to get them a more polished look and to tweak a few bits. i'm so sorry for the inconvenience that this has caused you.

because i didn't like how the story was going :(

The book has amazing world building that you will realize from the get-go. It's very immersive, and the characters are simply intriguing with distinct personalities. For others who are eager to read a good book with detailed world building and amazing characters, this one is for you.

The plot of the book itself is interesting enough to make you stay and read what'll happen next. However, there are a lot of grammatical errors that take away the enjoyment of reading such an unpolished gem of a book. Some of the descriptions are also lacking in some aspects. For example, it would've been nice to read a small blurb of Ryan's life before his reincarnation, that can make us readers invest emotionally into this character. You can show what kind of man he was before, then walk us through how different he will be in his new life. Like I said, this is an unpolished gem of a book. It can improve with a bit of editing and proofreading.

First of all, it's obvious from the start of the book that the author has taken painstaking means to write a high quality book to engage their readers. So, thank you for giving us such an intriguing book that we--or at least I--can't put down. What I like the most is the world-building that you've written so far and I also especially like how strong Author is, despite people treating him like yk sh-t. This particular brand is one of my guilty pleasures, haha!