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UltimateGodlyGene
UltimateGodlyGeneLv131yr
2023-06-18 23:01

can anyone make a proper review and not just praise it?

Ascension Of The Strongest Warlock

MKmanyr
4.7
167 Chs

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mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15

very confusing as the first chapter introduced a god level power that can kill everyone, thousands sacrificed themselves to trap him in a samsara (rebirth circle)next we see his most recent life where he is the lord of the underworld killed by his detective brother.He keeps his memories (supposedly)and is reborn in another more miserable life. As a beaten to death slave his system activates kicks in saving him, and he gets a powerful magic grimore. Now he begins leveling up killing monsters and humans. eventually realizes that he needs to look out for himself and starts acting like an overlord, add #antihero.leveling continues as he fights to get stronger and the world tries to kill him.hmmm more of a synopsis than a review but I'm not endeared to the story.

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Vladimir_1524
Vladimir_1524Lv13

review coming up:if you're looking for something well written like 'I am the villian' or 'dukes eldest son escaped to the military', novels where the mc has normal human motives and thought processes while incorporating a not overly intrusive 'system', then look else because this novel is all the typical isekai and reincarnator tropes thrown into a blender. First, the MC has no defining personality and changes arbitrarily depending on the situation, not to mention that his perception of concepts and events are at odds with his backstory (fully grown man, reincarnated and keeps his memories yet acts like an adolescent)Next, the story writing and pacing lacks any tension build up or resolution. The fights and trials are uninvolved and lack any emotional payoff at the end. Details and subplots are introduced that do not add anything meaningful to the story and more often then not showcase the dissonance between how the MC should act (considering his backstory) and how he does (cringelord).Final note: 3/10. Not worth the read but hopefully the writer learns from this project and improves his next work.

1yr
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UltimateGodlyGene
UltimateGodlyGeneLv13

nice

Vladimir_1524:review coming up:if you're looking for something well written like 'I am the villian' or 'dukes eldest son escaped to the military', novels where the mc has normal human motives and thought processes while incorporating a not overly intrusive 'system', then look else because this novel is all the typical isekai and reincarnator tropes thrown into a blender. First, the MC has no defining personality and changes arbitrarily depending on the situation, not to mention that his perception of concepts and events are at odds with his backstory (fully grown man, reincarnated and keeps his memories yet acts like an adolescent)Next, the story writing and pacing lacks any tension build up or resolution. The fights and trials are uninvolved and lack any emotional payoff at the end. Details and subplots are introduced that do not add anything meaningful to the story and more often then not showcase the dissonance between how the MC should act (considering his backstory) and how he does (cringelord).Final note: 3/10. Not worth the read but hopefully the writer learns from this project and improves his next work.
1yr
bramadingo
bramadingoLv13

Like that’s what I’m looking for before I commit I mean a proper review doesn’t have to be a bad review

1yr
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MKmanyr
MKmanyrAuthor

Author's expository reviews for fellow curious readers like me. The story is set in .a world where magic is the foundation of everything. Those who can wield magic are called warlocks and each warlock has a Grimoire unique only to them. As for the world building not much is known about the world yet because MC has always lived in confinement. Regarding the MC, he might start off a bit naive but that changed quickly. He was supposed to awaken an unparalleled Grimoire and make his family proud but as fate would have it, he ended up with something everyone deem useless... you can guess already that the MC won't be a Messiah but neither is he a satan Writing quality - no major error that will break your immersion from the story. Romance - yes, there will be romance even though it will take a bit of time for the plot to develop No harem, there won't be harem and if you're a harem lover you can still give it a try, trust me. The story is full of twists, epic action dark theme, mysteries and adventures that will get you hooked right from the first chapter. Beware if your heart can't handle over excitement and shock don't... If you still have any question, drop it here and I'll reply ASAP. Please do give it a try. Thanks

1yr

Khaled_Azzam
Khaled_AzzamLv4

I haven't started reading this novel yet but the MCs name is jerouch seriously, at least pick a cool name or smthn

1yr
GENGHIS_KHAN
GENGHIS_KHANLv13

“A cold hearted man who only sought power” …………………………………………………………………………………… romance tag😐😐

1yr
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

I would recommend you skip to the part after he escapes the slave prison and goes in the dungeon otherwise, you will be frustrated by the mc's retardness as he doesnt like a Mafia king but rather pathetic and his childhood makes it even worse since you would expect more fom him, but after that part he gets his power and it gets better I believe

1yr
Night_Spade
Night_SpadeLv1

It has a nice flow that just keeps you wanting to slide your fingers and keep going. A very interesting masterpiece

1yr
Dzazmie_D_Fountain
Dzazmie_D_FountainLv12

So, I've read till chapter 4 and I think I'm right when I guess that jerouch is William.to be honest, I didn't expect much as it is my first time reading an ascension or even rebirth novel. But, the author gave me quite a shock when I thought I'd stop at chapter, but then, found myself flipping until chapter five.Kudos, Author!

1yr
DeathSkull
DeathSkullLv4

well heres an information about warlocks. well they're kind of OP I guess?? infinite life span, and power absorption WarlocksWarlocks are magical beings who utilize their powers for their own self-service.Powers and AbilitiesPowersMagic: Warlocks possesses the standard magical abilities of casting spells, performing rituals, brewing magical potions, and scrying for the location of people or objects.Blinking: Warlocks possess the method of teleportation in which they instantly teleport from one location to another by blinking their eyes. Although this is a very common power amongst warlocks, not all of them have it.Power absorption: Warlocks have the power to absorb and gain ownership of the powers of other beings. Warlocks can absorb the powers of good witches by stabbing and killing them with an athame. Though primarily known for stealing powers from good witches, they can also steal from other beings too, such as demons.Immortality: Warlocks have an infinite lifespan and an arrested aging process.

1yr
Ebest
EbestLv3

Wow! I just love the way the author describe things here. Bravo!

1yr
Tama_Kun
Tama_KunLv3

Please do your best bro. I wish you luck

1yr
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