Good story but you can literally feel the inferiority complex the MC/author has for the og protagonist/all protagonists. Its hard for fanfic authors to not fall into the trap as its a psychological thing they aren't even aware of. id rather him kill off the og instead of embarrass himself by humiliating the og but a lot of sad folk on here like reading that kinda thing I guess. it dampens the quality of the story but other than I dont see any problems.
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