Review Detail of An_Average_Author in The Fight For purpose

I love the plot. I have never seen a boxing novel or any piece of media like it. The writing is decent. I would recommend more descriptive paragraphs and concise dialogue. I also recommend not throwing the characters' appearance in an awkward spot. For example, when Brett gets introduced, his appearance doesn't flow well with the paragraph. Overall it has an exciting plot and good writing style, and if you're looking for a sports novel, check this out! Good job, author!