Welp im droping this novel. 0 ZERO ORIGINALITY IT EITHER FOLLOWS THE GAME OR THE MOVIES. SOOOOOOO BOREING. !!!! End of the day the beginning was an awesome thought of the hogwarts legacy game character gets frozen in time till the 4th year of harry potter. Problems occur here with it followed the game to a T brought up many characters which is cool till you realize it doesn't matter, its 100 years later most are dead. So worthless plot that gets added in every other ch as a mc dream. Mc has zero self control hes OP however not even close its showed hes very weak when compared to other wizards, now mc only had 1 year of training. But he acctually had all his life since he grew up in a pureblood house the bloodline of gengis kahn acctually runs through him. I was thinking sweet harem or at least one romance would be nice, nope none so far. Hermione is already attached to ronniekins bleh. Mc swore a bond with the weasleys for telling him litteraly one known fact about the Wizarding world. Author explained it with oh mc just ate 100 years worth of ancient magic so hes messed up he will fix it. Next ch mc looks into it and apperently fixxed it with a snap. A horrible novel for originality, it straight up follows the books, movies, and games word for word. Id skip this i wasted 1 day of my life on this dont waste yours. Writing quality was amazing tho.
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I’d ask that you read past the opening chapters, if you want to claim there’s no originality. The opening volume is 51 chapters alone and story development takes time. My MC couldn’t just arrive in book 4 and automatically change things. He doesn’t know what’s going on. It’s not a self insert. He’s just waking up and all this is taking place In just a few days. You quit at chapter 18 so ya it’s not even been a week awake for our Mc. Original canon plans are still established, and he will have to go about figuring things out about this era first. Which means, at least at the beginning, some canon events will be the same, and he will just be reacting to it. I get that it might be too slow paced for some people. But to claim no originality, based on just the opening chapters, seems a bit unfair. Especially if you’re marking my review so poorly that it’s a 1.5 avg. Just writing quality and release schedule alone should be more than that. I’m just asking you give it a fair shot before judging it too harshly. At the very least, read the opening volume before you conclude anything.
Fine ill give it one more chance. Ill delete the review and start skipping chs that seem just reused
Sudoku:I’d ask that you read past the opening chapters, if you want to claim there’s no originality. The opening volume is 51 chapters alone and story development takes time. My MC couldn’t just arrive in book 4 and automatically change things. He doesn’t know what’s going on. It’s not a self insert. He’s just waking up and all this is taking place In just a few days. You quit at chapter 18 so ya it’s not even been a week awake for our Mc. Original canon plans are still established, and he will have to go about figuring things out about this era first. Which means, at least at the beginning, some canon events will be the same, and he will just be reacting to it. I get that it might be too slow paced for some people. But to claim no originality, based on just the opening chapters, seems a bit unfair. Especially if you’re marking my review so poorly that it’s a 1.5 avg. Just writing quality and release schedule alone should be more than that. I’m just asking you give it a fair shot before judging it too harshly. At the very least, read the opening volume before you conclude anything.
I've noticed the negative reviews and positive reviews seem to have a roughly consistent difference in time between them. I'm guessing that is when this story began is rapid downward descent.
