Item: The old princes (In Eragon's world)
Rating: 5
Author: Sammy_Redissi

Sammy_RedissiLv11yr

2023-03-13 02:01

Thank you for sharing your story with us, for the moment the plot is not progressing much and lacks a bit of action but I have a lot of expectations for the sequel. I love the world of Eragon so don't disappoint me author!

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