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GoofySleeperLv135mth
2024-09-24 14:01

this is really a good novel and It could be one of the best novels out there but The slow pacing actually killed the story It's really slow and Mc is just int the first cultivation levels also, Mc gathered too many mortal woman like they are worthless I think. But it's def worth to read.

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SKuLLAuthor

Agreed with the pacing, realized it far later in the story, around 500 chapters.

GoofySleeperLv13

senior does your new novel deviant no longer human has the same problem?

SKuLL:Agreed with the pacing, realized it far later in the story, around 500 chapters.
SKuLLAuthor

Not at all, no problems with pacing in that, but the first volume writing quality can be a bit cranky. I was re-reading recently, and I didn't feel the writing quality was up to mark. But the volume one is only of 70 chapters, and so, and it's not unreadable by anyways, and the problem is solved pretty quickly. It's most refined from Volume 3 and onwards, and pancing is quite fast. You would never feel it slows down at all, the women aren't collected like Pokemon either, as the motive of MC isn't to bed women but to get strong. He is quite literally the strongest in his world under 350 chapters, so yeah, pacing is far better. You can definitely read it, it's just a new theme so be patient, as each and every element is created by me and not copied. If you are looking for Xianxia you could also read 'Way of Evil Dao', my latest project, women are least of its important characters but since it's a R18 they are there, in their own natural way. Definitely try them both.

GoofySleeper:senior does your new novel deviant no longer human has the same problem?
GoofySleeperLv13

All right I will def try. btw I hope you will reach what you want your works should have been more popular you deserve better.

SKuLL:Not at all, no problems with pacing in that, but the first volume writing quality can be a bit cranky. I was re-reading recently, and I didn't feel the writing quality was up to mark. But the volume one is only of 70 chapters, and so, and it's not unreadable by anyways, and the problem is solved pretty quickly. It's most refined from Volume 3 and onwards, and pancing is quite fast. You would never feel it slows down at all, the women aren't collected like Pokemon either, as the motive of MC isn't to bed women but to get strong. He is quite literally the strongest in his world under 350 chapters, so yeah, pacing is far better. You can definitely read it, it's just a new theme so be patient, as each and every element is created by me and not copied. If you are looking for Xianxia you could also read 'Way of Evil Dao', my latest project, women are least of its important characters but since it's a R18 they are there, in their own natural way. Definitely try them both.
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