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HumptyDumptyDatAss
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2024-01-04 18:58

This is really mediocre at best, lack of other reviews make me think the author deleted the bad ones. There are so many forced plot points that the story just feels disjointed. Somehow the person who the MC took over actually loved the male lead but decided to act like she only cared for the money? And then the male lead also loved her as well? And he's also a leader of the special forces who couldn't track the MC despite her not doing anything to hide her tracks. They then also investigated the MC's apartment in search of the MC as a cat but somehow didn't realise the MC owns the apartment despite them looking for her? The writing quality is nice at least.

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