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2023-12-27 20:01

This is dope. As someone who isn't immersed in romantic books I ended up wanting to see more of this teenage love play out. Strange way to lose virginity but understandable and mixed with the emotions it is very real. Use of prose is on point with only room to grow, no downsides about the writing style. The plot is simple and yet capturing, I just love it. Thanks author for this, keep going fam.

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Ohhhhh a no-romance reader! Happy to know you gave my book a shot and that you enjoyed it!! ✨

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