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AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv11yr
2023-03-27 22:20

Its okay. The way author describes things seem a bit bland. Ex: “if the system takes all my points i will be furious.” This could be better and the way the mc says it feels unnatural. Character design is average mc from any other somewhat average novel. The novels not bad and i would give it 4 stars without any bias.

Gacha In Marvel and the Multiverse

Smalltimewriter
3.7
102 Chs

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Akshay_Singh_1275
Akshay_Singh_1275Lv1

I don't like those childish over the top emotional tantrums from the mc so bland works fine for me.

1yr
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Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

Reading this particular story is slightly less painful than pulling teeth, so two stars sounds fair enough rating to me.

1yr

Avengtank
AvengtankLv5

There is nothing interesting going on in this fanfic let me tell you in details, maybe author might get some help from this. 1. MC powers are very uninteresting. There is nothing interesting going on. 2. Lack of climax in the segment of the story. The MC achieves nothing particular interesting or different from the actual story line. Nothing to look forward to except the system. 3. Failing expectations of the readers. Its not like i am tell you to listen to the readers, no no thats not what it is , i want to say that we are getting excited on what the rewards will be from the gachas but the rewards pours cold water on us. 4. The story progress seems vague ......... 5. There were few sparks of romance but the author killed it. 6. Otherworld introduction haphazardly and choosing a wrong world. Fairly tail would be a nice world for the MC to grow but he chose MHA even though he got quirk. People would be excited for MHA if he didnot have a quirk and then get a quirk after going there and starting to develop it along side with the MC or the MHA arc 7. Again the choice of quirks and powers are so no interesting enough. 8. Poor utilization of powers, even after MC got kirishima's quirk he seems very fragile. Not saying you have to make MC op from start but remember its a fanfic , if we want MC to struggle just like every other novel we would not come here to read fanfic. 9. its been 90+ chaps nothing going on in those chapters, trust me if u skip few chapters in the middle u will not miss anything than fillers.

1yr
seal_teamvi
seal_teamviLv4

its okay but its written like a chinese translation even though it isnt one

1yr
BigNerdNasty
BigNerdNastyLv15

The story is fast then slow and the main theme (Gacha) is underwhelming

1yr
Noob_Author
Noob_AuthorLv2

Marvel fanfics are my favorite ones not to mention those that have a system, hope Author answers if we will be getting a romance or something like that

1yr
Avengtank
AvengtankLv5

Very underwhelming , feeling like i am reading chinese translation. Gacha is interesting but the author could do execute it nicely to keep the engagement of the readers. Also no harem in a fanfic also kinda very uninteresting to me.

1yr
TOMB_DRONE
TOMB_DRONELv10

i am a former writer myself so i guess i can say this that the author is really trying hard ,hope you keep up the good word and try upload more words instead of chapter counts,love it

1yr
Smalltimewriter
SmalltimewriterAuthor

Giving myself a review cause why not,I am gonna say it now,my novel is going to be a fast paced as well as a slow pace one,[img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
Taro
TaroLv15

Is there going to be any romance at all?

1yr
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