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The most dificult part is that he mentions that it's a starks ancestral marital art and there is no documentación of it in winterfell when wulfs mother is Neds aunt

Sorry but that about the marital art US just to much bullsh*t, like really to much that I don't know how to put it in words. Please edit it

The thing is that MJ is a sexy redhead with a seductive personality, while Zendaya's "MJ" has an apathetic and intellectual personality and a different complexion (not judging). Her character has nothing in common with the original MJ. Even Gwen has more in common. That's why they are different characters. It's like having Hulk and calling him Green Lantern just because both are green, only here is worse becouse it's Red Hulk instead of the normal one

Just saying bus Zendaya isnt Marry Jane, she is Michelle "MJ" Jones.

Please don't do crossover, there is enough material in the MHA world, Ragdoll from the Wild, Wild Pussycats after the loss of her Quirk and her career as a hero, the MC could talk-no-jutsu her to be his manager or... Don't know, La Brava?

So no mention if what happened with his sister, Corvus with Jons help could do somthing, or the Raven Guard

Talking about the junchiriki. 1. Naruto after the 4th ninja war kept a bit of each bijus chakra and with it, he could comunícate with them and ask for more chakra if needed. 2. In Sunagakure there already exists the magnet kekkei genkai, what the third Kazekage created were the Sand style based in his magnet release and the Shukaku Sand control So, based in these facts, if Rasa could convince the Shukaku to help Sunagakure and make all magnet release users parcial jinchurikis, the Shukaku could move his chakra between them helping them with their Sand control and manifest his bijus form if necesary anywere it's needed

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Like WTF, what happened with the cool khal with his myth system???

What the actual F*CK! Like I know it's a chinese novel but for GODs sake, if you are gonna make a FF based in american tv shows, keep your nacionalism in your pants. You can't make the MC some kind of hardcore China fan, You had a lot of asian actress Beauties but You had to get the most normal one and practicaly say she is a sex simbol and for GODs sake what the f*ck is Kung Fu Tea? Never heard of the term even in chinese novela. Other than the overhype to all and any chinese things it's pretty normal good novel, I recomend it in part, becouse there are practicaly no other shameless FF in this page and among the rare novela that tuch the pregnacy theme, it's good, just that🤷