Review Detail of BrokenandBored123 in Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

Item: Supernatural: The Great Hunter System
Rating: 1

Review detail

BrokenandBored123Lv31mthBrokenandBored123

Rapid change of pov, an mc that changes personality every five seconds and cringe dialogue make this almost unreadable.

Supernatural: The Great Hunter System

Millan_Grimm

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Millan_GrimmAuthorMillan_Grimm

Thank you for the criticism. Perhaps you only read the first few chapters? The proceeding chapters only have the MC's pov if that's anything.

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JustTiredOfPickingLv11JustTiredOfPicking

that's harsh...in later chaps, it gets a bit better...at worst it's 2.5/5...considering the webnovel fanfic standards it's fine...of course unless its ghosty or some unedited mtl...XD

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