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Spoiler Alert!! It is recommended to only read up to chapter 60, for the next chapter you can say it's trash. Because the author's logic has decreased so that the novel feels like a Chinese novel, the more you read each chapter you will get bored. Thank You!!

I like the idea of his powers Was wondering if it was a TL at some points (if it is please send original link) Mc is not stupid but also not an instant genius which is nice Could use better grammar but still very much readable

It’s alright. A pretty cool golden finger i suppose. The writing is decent overall and there’s no big mistakes even if it reads similar to many Chinese fan fics. However the mc is a typical mc with a hero syndrome and no real plan. Not to mention that the stories flow is quite terrible and several parts make absolutely no sense. Good as a shut your brain off fan fiction, never gonna be amazing but a decent time killer

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a classic marvel ffsi. but there is a difference. Yes, the Chinese writer does not understand the military. I knew that military service is compulsory in China. eg mc can rise from a plain soldier to lieutenant (perhaps normal in wartime), and then still lieutenant He can be treated as a private (straight soldier), and even as a bodyguard. the lieutenant didn't understand his weight

Its overall good. But, it feels like a chinese fic. I mean, there is no face slapping or losing face which I am gratefull for. But there are some plot holes too. Just to make them see Main character seen as a competent person, he rescued Howard stark from things which no other normal human could do. Howard stark would've died if he didnt interfere. I mean, In his second save, he idenifies poison in the beverage they bring to them in howard's office. how does he knows what poison smells like? And if Howard was going to die, Who was going to save him in the first place?

While the book establishes an interesting premise in the opening chapters, I was disappointed that the story failed to develop or progress in a meaningful way as I continued reading. For many pages, often spanning whole chapters, the narrative seemed to get stuck repeating the same scenes and scenarios without advancing the overall plot. Around the halfway point at page 248, I noticed the story was still following the same repetitive patterns of character behaviors and interactions rather than unfolding new events or revealing deeper layers to the mystery first introduced. This lack of narrative momentum left me feeling frustrated, as the early promise of an engaging mystery or character drama was not delivered on. The repetitive nature of the writing made it difficult for me to stay engaged or invested in what would happen next. As a reader, I want a story to evolve and take me to new places, introducing surprises and revelations along the way. Unfortunately, this book got stuck in a rut and did not satisfy my desire for progression of the central storyline. While the setup intrigued me, the execution ultimately fell short of taking the narrative to the next level in a truly compelling way.

c49-50 sigh...i just can't... could've saved the story with simple logic/explanation like the Space Stone disrupting his power and that Power Disruptor being designed by an elder....its like the author just gave up from that point on.