Review Detail of Para23 in Marigold, A New World

Eddie is so fun, as a main character and just in general! The way this is written is so charming, with characters that have a certain life and charm to them. I don't know how best to explain it, but it's really fun to read! I have to admit that even though I like it, the writting and descriptions themselves are a bit lacking. The story moves at a break neck pase at the start, and the description in the present tense is a bit off putting, making it a bit hard to imagine what is happening. But....I like it! I'm Actually gonna keep reading it in my own time cause Eddie is so fun lol