Writing quality - good except there are some typo or even misused words. Nothing to say about the stability of updates. Story development - no point writing a fanfic if it follows the OG too much, author is blaming it on some kind of ancient god fixing the plot, sounds like lazy writing to me. Character Design - nothing special World Background - author messed up the power system/grading. Skipping realms to fight is something common especially with several of maxed out super strong abilities.
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