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iTitan
iTitanLv121yr
2023-04-10 20:32

Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you

Way of Overlord

Keikokumars
4.2
446 Chs

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Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers

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iTitan
iTitanLv12

Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one

1yr
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Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

It is contracted now. So, this story will have development

1yr
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Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

Thank you. I also know this and I am trying to make a new kind of story where I try not to drag the plot out that much. I would appreciate it if you could see it and see whether it improved or not.

iTitan:Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one
1yr
1
iTitan
iTitanLv12

sure

1yr
1
Kiran_Jaiswal_0652
Kiran_Jaiswal_0652Lv1

Hope you keep on writing, adding this one to my library!

Keikokumars:the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers
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98_Games
98_GamesLv4

liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly

1yr

APOCALYPTIC_NOVELS
APOCALYPTIC_NOVELSLv4

this novel is very good, in my opinion butone this I don't like tho is it's too drawn out than necessary. the mc will be talking about the same thing for like 2-3 chapters it's kinda infuriating to me but overall it's very good give it a try guys

1yr
Sesi_Atigbor
Sesi_AtigborLv15

You keep repeating the same story over again Please, I do like the story setting but you keep repeating the same story in a roundabouts way

11mth
Mustafa_Alkhabeer_2931
Mustafa_Alkhabeer_2931Lv4

currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising

1yr
Daoistkd9C8k
Daoistkd9C8kLv3

it's good novel I hope more chapter's hahah

12d
Cromster
CromsterLv14

would be good the author can write nice but over does ot by writing the same paragraph six times worded differently. I don't meed read a thesaurus. I've given up after 90 chapters got bored the story constantly repetive no real progress theese 90 chapters could of been done in 15. the system loosely talked about more quest for mc grow and develop is needed. the story concep t is great would live read more but got so repetive and slow I had give up .

28d
Slothiticus
SlothiticusLv14

great novel overall, really excellent at developing the various characters. If I have a gripe it's that it is to slow which is inherently a bad thing but I'm skirting the line between interested and bored. With the constant slow pace I can't bring myself to use anymore points on unlocking chapters. I don't mind it being slow for a few chapters but a lot of the stuff covered in the slow chapters has been covered repeatedly. I'm often paying to read the same content just in a new setting ie now instead of him thinking about it while sitting on a horse he is explaining it to someone.. which makes sense logically but for a reader it's redundant information. Not saying that it needs more action just needs more things than it's currently giving me.

1yr
Kj_Lastman
Kj_LastmanLv13

ok i don't like the story write from 3rd pov like 80% of the time I like the story going just not this type story telling its hard for me to really going in to the book when it tell from that pov just to much monologue all the time this make me thing just like a children book my parents read it to me but I'm still Reading it just have to force my self with it??

1mth
adam_Jamaes
adam_JamaesLv1

Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers

5mth
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