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Cromster
CromsterLv142mth
2024-12-01 19:37

would be good the author can write nice but over does ot by writing the same paragraph six times worded differently. I don't meed read a thesaurus. I've given up after 90 chapters got bored the story constantly repetive no real progress theese 90 chapters could of been done in 15. the system loosely talked about more quest for mc grow and develop is needed. the story concep t is great would live read more but got so repetive and slow I had give up .

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I have been trimming it down

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