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iTitan
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2023-04-10 12:32

Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you

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Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers

iTitan
iTitanLv12

Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one

Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

It is contracted now. So, this story will have development

Keikokumars
KeikokumarsAuthor

Thank you. I also know this and I am trying to make a new kind of story where I try not to drag the plot out that much. I would appreciate it if you could see it and see whether it improved or not.

iTitan:Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one
iTitan
iTitanLv12

sure

Kiran_Jaiswal_0652
Kiran_Jaiswal_0652Lv1

Hope you keep on writing, adding this one to my library!

Keikokumars:the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers
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