Item: Way of Overlord
Rating: 4.2
Author: iTitan

iTitanLv121yr

2023-04-10 20:32

Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you

Way of Overlord

Keikokumars

4.2

456 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies6

KeikokumarsAuthor

the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers

1yr

iTitanLv12

Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one

1yr

KeikokumarsAuthor

It is contracted now. So, this story will have development

1yr

KeikokumarsAuthor

Thank you. I also know this and I am trying to make a new kind of story where I try not to drag the plot out that much. I would appreciate it if you could see it and see whether it improved or not.

iTitan:Bro understand this, your novels are amazing good stories and all that but there's too much of info drops and repetitions of details, it's amazing that lord shadow is still on going and Ariel is paused but all that they have in common is repetitions of details which ruins the plot. check stories like shadow slave, release that witch and others and you will see that your story tops all but many people prefer that because there's too much of details repetitions which people don't like and to them it's seems boring. so please check that and I hope you get to new heights with this one

1yr

iTitanLv12

sure

1yr

Kiran_Jaiswal_0652Lv1

Hope you keep on writing, adding this one to my library!

Keikokumars:the only oen that I dropped is the Wulin series. that is because of copyright issue. as for Last Son of Terra, I am posting it in my blog slowly. there is not many audience for Last Son of Terra and no ody seem to be commenting anything. it does get tiring when you feel that you are writing for yourself instead for readers

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