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OlerolinLv151yr
2023-08-27 12:42

I love the premise I just feel like he does way less janitorial work even though it makes him stronger faster then any method. I feel like it's a distraction when cultivation should be the distraction. Some interesting sparks that feel like they got smothered in the rest of the authors avalanche of ideas. I feel like if you focused a bit on a few less ideas we'd get some banger chapters.

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