Item: The Elf Prince Revival
Rating: 4.6
Author: 002_Yuki_Onna

002_Yuki_OnnaLv31yr

2023-03-21 12:54

Interesting story so far and so forth. It is descriptive and planned well. There are places which can be improved, for example, some sentences might break the reading flow at once. They might be pretty complicated to get at first. Other than this and some typos, I think the story is awesome. I would suggest you re-read the chapters before publishing them, it helps a lot. Great work author! Looking forward to more chapters.

The Elf Prince Revival

Kage007

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