Review Detail of Xouldrion in Mountain with a Soul

I'll be shameless. After 30 chapters, I see where the novel will be heading. Do not expect MC to be op quickly or that he has a system. Instead, he explores everything by himself. No established cultivation realms or magical cores and spells. Everything depends on him alone. He's not outright stupid, but he has his flaws, like not predicting every danger or creating and inventing things out of thin air. He'll feel pain, he will suffer, but he always will have a fighting chance. If you are interested I hope you'll check out the novel. Ideas of improvement, tips, tricks, ideas and thoughts in the development of this novel are welcome.