It's a good story with a great potential. The mistake like grammar and typo is also really unnoticable. The world background is also a bit of a fresh air, especially with many cultivation novel around here. The pacing is kinda slow (at least for me) but it doesnt feels like filler yet. I do have concern about the attitude of the MC and the name of the system though To be honest I try to read this novel after sering kingdom building in the title. But as the story progress I realize that the subject of the MC are probably those girls that comes from gacha and nothing more (at least until chapter 41) . That limits the number of the subject, so to be honest I kinda dissapointed. Moreover, as the story goes I also feels kinda frustrated with MC behaviour. Again I come here expecting some kind of faction building, so I expect the protagonist have some quality of a leader, but I am disappointed. The proeels like a door mat, (at least as far as chapter 41) especially the scene where he gives many equipment but got nothing, even up until that point, she still doesnt trust him. To be honest, he is really not a good leader material, I'm confused how he even got that system. With honesty over the top that question whether he is jp protag, to some kind of naive personality by trusting other people too easily. But overall it's somewhat ejoyable story
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