Review Detail of Neph1s in Everlasting Magus

The story is intriguing but the way the plot is worded may be confusing at first. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing too serious that may break the immersion. However, I would lie if I said that I'm not interested in how Jack deals with the new abilities! Keep it up! Just a little more attention to grammar and plot progression and it will become a fantastic work! Good luck, author!