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Darkswan
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2023-03-31 10:16

The book has only just begun, but I can say that it is off to a good start; I don't see many issues; the grammar and pacing are good; there are a few improvements that could be made here and there, but that's normal; I like the MC and the way everything is progressing and I believe this story has a lot of potential good luck!

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