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Fujiashi
FujiashiLv31yr
2023-04-17 13:07

This is not usually what I read, but it is interesting. Although the synopsis feels lacking for me and there are very few errors in the first few chapters. I like the phasing and the way the author describes things, but I also find some words repetitive.

The Lightning Legacy

The_little_boy
4.9
54 Chs

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TreasureFinal
TreasureFinalLv1

Okay, so I just read the first chapter and I have to be honest about this. The author writes the first chapter so well, that it felt natural to even me. Moreover, the descriptions. Oh, I love the descriptions as the author includes all the five fives senses in the descriptions. THIS NOVEL IS GOOD. And I can't describe how good it is... Truth be told, this is one of the first fantasy books that include my reality. The fact that the Mc was a programmer. Even so, I still don't understand why the build process took so long.. Even yet, this novel is really good.

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Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

I would say it's a very good start. It would seem his boring day turned into an exciting day inviting him to his new environment where he was automatically greeted by a large blue light coming right for him. I would say is turning exciting and hoping the author posts more pages soon as it does have me wondering what will happen next along the way.

1yr
Nons_Ense
Nons_EnseLv1

This is one of the few books that I have read that has a programmer as the MC. I have heard that programmers are good problem solvers. for this reason alone, I am hooked. Moreover, the author does a good job explaining and describing everything to the minute details. Just love it. Waiting for more chapters.

1yr
_Smart_Guy
_Smart_GuyLv1

This Story will be super interesting. The author start this time was much better than what he did with The Lightning Descendant. I am a fan of your work: The Lightning descendant. This one started well, hopefully it doesn't end up like The Lightning descendant. Over-all, I would say this novel is extremely promising and I think It's about time that we had a new novel with the MC having lightning as his superpower! I am just hooked!

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Genesis_writer
Genesis_writerLv3

This story is great and good in everything from the writing to story. But I had already caught up with the latest chapters as chapters are too few for me. So I am looking for new novel to read but couldn’t find a good one although I have one in mind but it just started and has less chapters too but still got great potential based on releases chapter till now. Wanna check that book out. Ok I will tell the name but like my review if you find that book is good. Great here you go. Name Holographic Conjuring System This book got only 2 chapters at least for now. Check it out and don’t forget to like my review.

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The_little_boy
The_little_boyAuthor

Interviewer: "Do you think you are ready for this?" The_Little_Boy: "Of course, I am!" Interviewer: "Alright speak then..." 3... 2.... 1.... "Roll!" The_Little_Boy: "So, it's finally time for the generic five star review huh? Well, let me give you a brief summary of the novel before I say anything else. 'This novel is about a young and aspiring programmer, Aiden who intends to build apps that can help improve the society. However, his dreams came tumbling down when he is transmigrated into a new world where magic existed. He slowly adapts to the new world and also gains a new dream in the process of doing so. He now wanted to become the stronger mage in the world and he embarks in a journey to fulfill his new dream.... " Comments: 1. My first comment is that this book my seem very cliche but trust me it's not. The start might seem incredibly familiar but, it would change as time progress. Be ready for lots of twist and turns. 2. This novel has a slightly slower start as compared to most other novel because I want to take my time to explain all the main things about this new world before I continue. Thus might seem very slow, but trust me, the story will gain momentum as it continues. 3. I am still thinking about whether this book should have a harem or not. I have decided to entrust this decision to my readers. Comment 'harem' for a harem and 'no-harem' for no harem. At the start of the volume where his first love interest will take place, I will count all of this to check the one which my readers want the most and execute it according to that. 4. Update speed: I will be updating 1 chapter everyday and maybe two chapters on some days. for every 100 power stones votes though, I will provide 3 extra chapters. And for every 5 golden tickets, I will provide, to extra chapters at the end of the week. So please remember to vote. 5. Support: Please remember to support this book as it is part of a competition. Remember to comment and leave a review after you have read for a while. Those are the only words that I have to say. You can ask any question about the book by commenting it here, under this review! Bye, and enjoy reading the book!" *Cut!* Director: "He did well.. He is very good!" Interviewer: "Indeed I think he is the right man for the job. He is hired now!" The_Little_Boy: "Yes, it worked." (looking into the camera) "Remember to leave a review! Bye" *Wink!*

1yr
ItsHashi
ItsHashiLv4

Gyatt, shi's actually heat bru i didn't even expect to not be generic mid shi, i mean it's still early and still got a lot more to improve, but so far its heat

1yr
babydragon25
babydragon25Lv1

As he is transported, the blue light coming for him really surprises me. The author has a way of describing things that make me feel nerve wracking sensations. Much love, author.

1yr
OSM_1015
OSM_1015Lv13

😲 Wow I think I'm anything but really loviN' the pacing of this story. Though it yet to bloom fully, it still outshines 😍 keep up the good work dear author ✨⚡ Looking forward to this awesome realm's update 😁🤫🤗 Thank you!!!

1yr
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