New WSA 2023 novel. It's a novel without cultivation realm and magical circles, they are getting old. So I thought to use someyhing different and prefered to take the hint from One Piece instead of making a whole new power prowess. (Powers akin to One Piece.) Devil Fruit = Fate Pome Armament Haki = Armament Will Observation Haki = Observation Will Conqueror Haki = Conqueror Will (MC type.) He loves Drinking, Swearing and Flirting (Like Sanji but more vulgur). Strong from start, will build a mercenary. (Novel type) Comedy, Action, Adventure, Mystery, Missions and Wars. (5 Powerful Forces) Empires □ Bandits □Pirates □ Adventurer Guilds □ Church

Not a bad start at all, just from the beginning the novel can attract weeb like us then it has potential to become something big, just don't lose your momentum and keep up the pace. Good luck. 👍👍👍

I have been told to make a review for this book, so you can totally trust me to be completely honest about this, and I’ve definitely read the only chapter currently released, so basically the mc is a forgotten hero, I’m sure you couldn’t tell from the novels name, the mc has a very fleshed out personality and the side characters feel like real people and aren’t just there for the main plot, so if you like books like that read this or something I don’t know

Good dialogue interesting premise, certain parts made me laugh so that's definitely a plus! Keep going at it m8... Good Luck... Added to collection!

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I'm still in the early chapters, but I thought the story was catchy enough that I needed to write a review for it as soon as possible. Writing Quality is always subjective, so I base my rating on legibility, pacing, and character over tiny grammar issues most people make in their first drafts. This work passes that easily enough. Story development; as I've said, I'm still in the esrly chapters, but what I've seen so far is gripping to the point of a real page turner. Five stars for now. Character design -- in a word, Tufail is insane, drunk, rowdy as F, and generally the type of protagonist that you want to root for. The side characters feel like they need more work compared to him, but that takes time so I'm looking forward to spending time reading about them some more. Update -- easily 5 stars. World -- the setting's typical fantasy flare, but tropes exist for a reason. I'm in it for the unique magical system -- that really isn't a system -- and the similarities I've noticed with a certain pirtae-themed manga I love. It's original enough that I don't feel like I'm reading a fanfic too. all in all, this is a story that's worth a read, and a collection too!

So far only 2 chapters have been released but the story shows a lot of promise and potential. Read and you won't regret it.

Okay, to be honest... This is good. I mean just the synopsis alone has a pull factor. I've never read a novel with an old MC that I find interesting. This is something different and promising . Where chapter 2 at??? 🤷

The story is great and that all can't say a lot by only 1 Chap, so keep going.