pink_lollie24

Beautiful writing with so much depth it really brought the characters to life and I was very much immersed in the world created by those author. Kudos to you on a job well done! Keep on writing!

This author does a wonderful job in bring this world and characters to life. The writing is beautiful and the settings are so realistic I feel like I am inside the world she describes. Great job! Keep up the good work and don't stop! :D

Spectacular writing style, vivid imagination come to life. Enjoyed reading this story. Hope the author keeps at it and waiting to see more chapters released. Story line is great! Kudos to you author!

The writing is amazing this author has incredible flow and a unique story telling style. I'm sure this story will stand out from the crowd in this genre as this author gives us more chapters. Can't wait! Kudos to you author!

Okay okay this genre is not my cup of tea. But as always this author's storytelling style is genius and his character really do jump to life . The flow is really there and there are no hiccups along the way when it comes to reading this story if you know what I mean. Kudos to you!

Sheesh the writing is flawless the action is riverting this author know what their doing. It's bloody brilliant and the author does a wonderful job at emotional expression of the characters. Kudos to you author!

The writing style is great, story line is interesting and fast paced. Left on a cliff hanger which adds to suspense makes you want to read more if your into apocalyptic settings.

thanks !

Loved the opening, its hopeful despite what the characters are going through. The author has good flow and demonstrates an ease with description and expression. You will be hooked from the first chapter! Keep up the good work!

A mash up of creative ideas. The story was entertaining up to where I read. The story truly exceeded my expectations, this author has wonderful flow and I'm sure she will not disappoint as the reader keeps reading.