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Night_Crawler619
Night_Crawler619Lv152yr
2023-03-03 21:49

The quality of the writing is excellent! It's refreshing to find first-person stories on webnovel with such superb writing. I really like Rowen's character design. He's intelligent, calculating, and composed, based on what I've read about him. (Can you believe it? An intelligent MC? Pinch me coz I must be dreaming!) The story follows the "forced to be a villain" trope, where our protagonist has no choice but to confront and eliminate the protagonist of the novel he was reincarnated into if he wishes to survive. I'm completely invested in it! The dialogue is skillfully written, the character is believable, and the story flows smoothly. The author's mastery of the English language is evident in their use of excellent grammar, which is neither too difficult to drive you away nor too repetitive to feel bland and monotonous. Overall, I'm eagerly anticipating the plot's progression 😌

The Villain Can't Lose

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4.6
91 Chs

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Tamaki_Leon
Tamaki_LeonLv12

A "Forced to become a villain" trope novel, that's the basic gist of this. For a more in-depth view on it, let's look at it in a bit more detail. When it comes to writing quality, there's room to improve, but it's readable and allows one to enjoy the book. Updates are daily, which is good. For story development, sometimes the flow is a bit confusing, but the plot overall is good, making you want to come back for more. As a character design enthusiast, unfortunately, I have to rate it a bit lower, as I find there is a lack of feeling (Which can be improved on) in certain dialogue texts, author does explain some things about the character, but not enough for me sadly. World background-wise, there's nothing much to expand on this as we've yet to go deep in world-building, but it's promising. Overall, it's a good book on WN. with room to improve and become better. Keep up the good work author-san!

2yr

Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

what's with this logic less things happeninng.... 1st)-- mc mutting his thought out loud like an idiot (cliche).. 2nd) mc have not even seen protagonist still he came to conclusion that he had to kill him to survive (yeah it doesn't make sense)... thinks that mc could have done:-- avoid protagonist... kill his father..... ask help from protagonist..... ask help from king ... run away after solving tracking problem..... but out of every good solution mc came to conclusion that he have to kill protagonist....... you are saying we are just supposed to believe him in his idiotic thoungt while author is not metioning anything...

1yr
ADOLF_KITLER
ADOLF_KITLERLv4

Great novel overall but still too new too binge but so far so good and btw the discord link is invalid so pls tell me ur username and tag and send link there

2yr
Akatsuki07
Akatsuki07Lv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Hassy_101
Hassy_101Lv14

Writing is almost flawless, picture–able scenes, thanks to the good description. MCs character is not exaggerated and the events happened like how they would in reality... in other words, the first few chapters I read are realistic. Great job author!

2yr
Bibongsensei
BibongsenseiLv4

it's good but the lack of information is quite the problem bcs author-san didn't want to info bump i guess.. like how how many dukes are there in a kingdom?or how the kingdom works?or is the demons invader from another world? or they're from different continent?or why is his only way of survival is to kill the hero? .... but overall it's good just lacking a little world background 😎👌

1yr
Eli_o_Eli
Eli_o_EliLv1

The tag "tragedy" is missing. I'm in the current chapters (end of the first season), but I'm necessarily stopping here. This story really took me on a roller coaster of emotions, enough to make me really uncomfortable with the sudden tragedy that isn't in the tags. I particularly don't like the genre and I don't even start readings that contain tragedy. I know many people like it, but I think the tags are there for that, a warning. This is a sentimental review, as if I'm going to review it purely technically, it's actually perfect. But the sudden tragedy is over for me. I wish the author good luck. And readers are warned, there's a hidden tragedy tag there, whether you like it or not.

1yr
Sahil_8379
Sahil_8379Lv3

At first I hesitated a bit before starting this novel because I thought this is your typical generic novel but boy I WAS WRONG... this is a great novel that exceeded my expectations, although the starting of the novel is a bit mess and I was a little annoyed but the story doesn't let you lose your interest and you are eager to know what will happen next. I am a little bit disappointed that I caught up with the story ...The ending of first arc was really unexpected and I am really excited about the academy arc that is going on and what the future of our MC holds and I am really excited for it. Please author don't drop or drag the story and Great work again and hoping for more surprises Dear Author [img=recommend]

1yr
Sahil_Gharat
Sahil_GharatLv4

did author drop this novel? ?? . .

1yr
Pato93
Pato93Lv14

This is my first time reading the ‘forced to be a villain’ trope. Glad I picked up this book to start because it’s super interesting and I’m definitely hooked. I don’t know what the other reviews are saying about the writing - this is far better than some of the more popular books I’ve read on WN. The updates are regular as well. I’m hooked. Can’t wait to read more. Keep going author! More chapters please!

1yr
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