Review Detail of Mohand_Mouloud in Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

My last Review of this novel! apart from the good start, the rest is not crazy. The author uses words too often in any way, as they lose their relevance (example of these words: curiosity, fear, admiration, excited, honesty, exaltation, prudence) he uses them far too often, and he put it where there is space, sometimes it just doesn't make sense, and other times it's just there to add more words. Talk about the mc, the more time passes the more we have the impression that he is older or older, he does everything possible to please these teachers and he is afraid of disappointing them, the more time passes the more shy he becomes and is afraid of defending this (especially women). talk about the mc's power level, the author begins by showing us how strong he is, fighting a former director, fighting one of the strongest men of the strongest family behind the academy of darkness, fighting dozens see hundreds of mystics, then the tournament between acadimia arrives and the mc has difficulty with simple students, because he does not have enough "experience", which of these students has fought someone of level of a director and came out victorious? who among them fought a first class mystic? and kill her?? who fought against 5, 10, 20 mystics and came out victorious?, then to make a tournament stupid logical he destroys the mc and makes it difficult for him against students... this infuriates me! A question Mr. author please why make a transmigratory mc and then make sure to make it as mature as possible, that's the point that bothers me the most!