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WARNING :NTR ALERT My fellow readers be warned stay away from this book if you don't like NTR. His first har*m member i.e akuna is a W hore and has had sx with other men countless times. also his sister while away from him starts liking other men and even has sx with them, 2 to be more precise , and when they reunite she tells mc that she loves them and that she hates MC, upto the latest chapter that I have read when MC k* lled them, she is heartbroken and cries for them, she is a W hore, i repeat she doesn't like mc anymore (she did in the past), this is n t r,be warned. I have hurt myself during this perilous journey so pls my fellow readers stay away if you don't like n t r. I hope my sacrifices are not in vain
I Farm Demons : Unholy Necromancer In the Apocalypse
Yonaas
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ash_waa_012:there were instances in the book when Eva CLEARLY says she likes x or Sylvan, i don't understand how can you say this while writing that
hi , i am so sorry that u feel hurt while reading my book , but i wonder why u felt that way, there is no ntr in the book, Eva never showed love to any other males in the story, probably you think she liked the demon sylvan or x , but no, eva only wanted to protect both of them from xylon when he tried to kill them . and she sacrificed her entire life for the mc by keeping him alive when he was her additum , she sacrificed not having kids or a potential partner to be bound to him by the bond of servitude , how that would make her a wh9999re !! she only said said she hated her when he acted cruel but anyone could tell that she did that out of frustration . i am sorry but i think i am trully amazed that eva's emotions were interpreted this way . thanks anyway
there were instances in the book when Eva CLEARLY says she likes x or Sylvan, i don't understand how can you say this while writing that
Yonaas:hi , i am so sorry that u feel hurt while reading my book , but i wonder why u felt that way, there is no ntr in the book, Eva never showed love to any other males in the story, probably you think she liked the demon sylvan or x , but no, eva only wanted to protect both of them from xylon when he tried to kill them . and she sacrificed her entire life for the mc by keeping him alive when he was her additum , she sacrificed not having kids or a potential partner to be bound to him by the bond of servitude , how that would make her a wh9999re !! she only said said she hated her when he acted cruel but anyone could tell that she did that out of frustration . i am sorry but i think i am trully amazed that eva's emotions were interpreted this way . thanks anyway
you clearly have missed that intention while writing this novel if that was your intention , all it feels like is that she just now hates him and and wants to run away from him with either of the two. she doesn't do anything when someone forcefully kisses her, she doesn't do anything when either of the two(x or syvan) touch her or try to get close with her, almost as if she wants them to, what would you call that if not NTR? what else?
Yonaas:not romantically
also you saying she doesn't like them romantically means nothing if it is not shown as such in the story
Yonaas:hi , i am so sorry that u feel hurt while reading my book , but i wonder why u felt that way, there is no ntr in the book, Eva never showed love to any other males in the story, probably you think she liked the demon sylvan or x , but no, eva only wanted to protect both of them from xylon when he tried to kill them . and she sacrificed her entire life for the mc by keeping him alive when he was her additum , she sacrificed not having kids or a potential partner to be bound to him by the bond of servitude , how that would make her a wh9999re !! she only said said she hated her when he acted cruel but anyone could tell that she did that out of frustration . i am sorry but i think i am trully amazed that eva's emotions were interpreted this way . thanks anyway
eva was only kissed by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his harem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to kill him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
ash_waa_012:you clearly have missed that intention while writing this novel if that was your intention , all it feels like is that she just now hates him and and wants to run away from him with either of the two. she doesn't do anything when someone forcefully kisses her, she doesn't do anything when either of the two(x or syvan) touch her or try to get close with her, almost as if she wants them to, what would you call that if not NTR? what else?
man the very fact that you say , she was kissed by Sylvan and she is ok with it is N T R. also why do i feel like she hates him you may ask? have read your own story for the past 50 or so chapters? there is no show of love or feelings between them, instead what we got is her defending and going against mc for other men. as i said your intention might have been different but the way you have written the things these past chapters does not convey it at all. additionally, the very fact that you have included a kiss between Sylvan and Eva, when even mc has only done that once is infuriating
Yonaas:eva was only kissed by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his harem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to kill him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
well the very fact that you have included a kiss of supposed fmc with someone other than mc is N T R
ash_waa_012:man the very fact that you say , she was kissed by Sylvan and she is ok with it is N T R. also why do i feel like she hates him you may ask? have read your own story for the past 50 or so chapters? there is no show of love or feelings between them, instead what we got is her defending and going against mc for other men. as i said your intention might have been different but the way you have written the things these past chapters does not convey it at all. additionally, the very fact that you have included a kiss between Sylvan and Eva, when even mc has only done that once is infuriating
Hey I think your comment was shadow banned as I can see it in your profile and not the message itself
Yonaas:eva was only kissed by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his harem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to kill him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
ps: i guess it was shadow banned , eva was only kissed in the cheek by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his hareeeem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to killlll him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
ash_waa_012:Hey I think your comment was shadow banned as I can see it in your profile and not the message itself
Yonaas:ps: i guess it was shadow banned , eva was only kissed in the cheek by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his hareeeem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to killlll him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
Yonaas:ps: i guess it was shadow banned , eva was only kissed in the cheek by sylvan whom she thinks of as a chaotic kid, x didn't kiss eva at all, and the moment she heard about his hareeeem she just was disgusted of him completely , she didn't even want to talk to him after that until xylon wanted to killlll him ( and there she stepped to protect him , because to her his reaction was exaggerated ) eva doesn't hate xylon , why do u think she hates him just because she said that when she was completely frustrated !
ash_waa_012:also i think you can write k*ll and harem without getting shadow banned
ash_waa_012:also i think you can write k*ll and harem without getting shadow banned
Yonaas:i thought those words shadow banned my other comment , i don't know why
ash_waa_012:man the very fact that you say , she was kissed by Sylvan and she is ok with it is N T R. also why do i feel like she hates him you may ask? have read your own story for the past 50 or so chapters? there is no show of love or feelings between them, instead what we got is her defending and going against mc for other men. as i said your intention might have been different but the way you have written the things these past chapters does not convey it at all. additionally, the very fact that you have included a kiss between Sylvan and Eva, when even mc has only done that once is infuriating
ash_waa_012:man the very fact that you say , she was kissed by Sylvan and she is ok with it is N T R. also why do i feel like she hates him you may ask? have read your own story for the past 50 or so chapters? there is no show of love or feelings between them, instead what we got is her defending and going against mc for other men. as i said your intention might have been different but the way you have written the things these past chapters does not convey it at all. additionally, the very fact that you have included a kiss between Sylvan and Eva, when even mc has only done that once is infuriating
can u go to my profile and read another comments i made for another reader, he was basically saying the same thing , and let me know what u think
ash_waa_012:this ^