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ash_waa_01216dReplied to Melon_daomaster_9- ash_waa_01216dReplied to Melon_daomaster_9
Excited??!??! she is excited that she killed her husband for another man?
"I am a nasty woman who killed her husband for another man and a ungrateful wrench who gave her family's revenge to get together with enemy's son" - ash_waa_01217dReplied to Melon_daomaster_9
- ash_waa_01217dCommented
*can't differentiate
"My cute Idiot,can't the difference in these 'memories' and the reality - ash_waa_01217dReplied to Melon_daomaster_9
but that is from plot right?where ji rongmei and mc weren't even properly acquainted ? how would they be husband and wife them? why is she even thinking about this when there was no intimacy between them in the original plot?
"I am a nasty woman who killed her husband for another man and a ungrateful wrench who gave her family's revenge to get together with enemy's son" - ash_waa_01217dCommented
do you want to say that ji rongmei summoned the same phenomenon in the sky as that of the ji family ancestor who made the ji family reach such lofty heights? if so, then i implore you to improve your grammar ,not only here but everywhere in the novel there are grammatical errors which confuse me as to what the meaning of the sentence would be.
It was the same immortal ji clan's ancestor who developed their clan to the same level of Immortal Ye family and other domiant forces in the upper realm and after their ancestor's fall,Ji clan declined. - ash_waa_01217dCommented
wait what? when did that happen? what?
"I am a nasty woman who killed her husband for another man and a ungrateful wrench who gave her family's revenge to get together with enemy's son" - ash_waa_01218dReplied to SocialHippo
hey my guy, just curious, why haven't you mentioned that there will be yuri in the synopsis of the novel?y'k the small description that you added, that's the synopsis,all you have to do is write a sentence there that says "This work contains Yuri". and then there will be no more drama, also I'd suggest you do that if you write any future novels.
- ash_waa_0121mthCommented
that came Outta nowhere
There was a burning desire inside me to become the strongest in this world of fantasy where magic existed, but Adrian Vaiself was a literal garbage character with no talent in anything. - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to ash_waa_012
man what a mess has he made...
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
hey random stranger, i apologise if my little brother might have said something rude or disrespectful to you, I came in seeing him playing with my account, do pls forgive him if he did something rude.
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
spoil it for me I'm all for it!
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
so how did she even discover it? that she loves him and not others?
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
not that, I was talking about how this sentence was sounding ,I think you should adjust it so that it is clear that she blushed only because he was the one that said it. also why is this an intimate word?
Her cheeks flushed the moment he brought the harem subject. - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
that's exactly why she shouldn't have said those words,to save his life.
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon." - ash_waa_0121mthCommented
also what was this about? i remember reading this and just skimming through it cause it frustrated me ?
'He remembered!' she thought …' I thought he didn't even pay attention to what I said that day ….' - ash_waa_0121mthCommented
why this rxn? this makes it look like she blushed when mc mentioned that x was attempting to add her in his harem? she looks excited
Her cheeks flushed the moment he brought the harem subject. - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to
yeah you say that and then in the latest chs ut happens again.
Sylvan swiftly swept Eva off her feet and pressed her back against one of the trees, using its cover to shield them from prying eyes. - ash_waa_0121mthReplied to Yonaas
what she said was impulsive and that's why I came from her heart...i don't think she is stupid enough to say that she loves someone in front of mc
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon." - ash_waa_0121mthCommented
what about this then? she literally says she loves x..
"T-t-this man," Eva stammered, her voice trembling with emotion, "saved me from... the council. This man is the person I-I-I... I love, Xylon."