Item: Spellcrafter's Demise
Rating: 5
Author: OakFlame

OakFlameAuthor2yr

2023-04-05 11:55

After writing to chapter 60, I've decided to leave a review of what I think about my book. The writing quality is great. If it wasn't, then I've wasted the last few years of my life working on a writing degree. Much of the first 50 chapters are set up for the future of the novel, but they don't feel dry. Every time I go back to reread or edit a part of my story, I get caught up in reading and end up wasting a ton of time. It could be because I write stuff that I personally think is funny, but I love the humor. There have been multiple times when I'm writing that I burst out laughing, attracting the stares of everyone else waiting for class. Slightly less funny. Around chapter 50, I'm finally getting into the first major plot arc. Hidden schemes, political strife, and uncertain allies plague the City of Edain, creating an environment where Edol will need to struggle and learn in order to survive. Writing this has gotten to be super fun- putting together bits of foreshadowing and setting up for future events is quite the experience. I'm happy with the beginning of the novel, but I think this is where it will really shine. I hope you read and enjoy this novel as much as I'm enjoying writing it! Now, to answer a few questions you might have: Q. Is this a harem novel? A. No, there will be a single FL. Q. Is there NTR? A. No, why would there be? The romance will be wholesome. Diabetes level wholesome, if I can write it well enough. Q. Release rate? A. 2 chapters a day.

Spellcrafter's Demise

OakFlame

4.9

193 Chs

Liked by 13 people

Replies8

PumazLv14

You got me excited for this

1yr

OakFlameAuthor

Hopefully you enjoy :)

Pumaz:You got me excited for this

1yr

PumazLv14

I do it is great

OakFlame:Hopefully you enjoy :)

1yr

matamoraLv15

this was hilarious to read, but you're not wrong 😅Very good self analysis 👍

1yr

OakFlameAuthor

Thanks for reading!

matamora:this was hilarious to read, but you're not wrong 😅Very good self analysis 👍

1yr

SliverLanceLv4

did the romance start already? and will you be updating this novel soon?

1yr

OakFlameAuthor

There is a bit of romance already, but the main part of it will be starting soon. If I see people reading to the newest chap I’ll start releasing more chaps, but for now it’ll stay at a few chaps/month.

SliverLance:did the romance start already? and will you be updating this novel soon?

1yr

SliverLanceLv4

Noice!

OakFlame:There is a bit of romance already, but the main part of it will be starting soon. If I see people reading to the newest chap I’ll start releasing more chaps, but for now it’ll stay at a few chaps/month.

1yr

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YSP_PWLv2

Not only is the story engaging but the writing quality is good as well, it develops nicely with emotions and imagery, I liked the way the writer described the scene well. Good luck with the book; it has suspense and a plotline and seems to have perfect shape and planning.

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RiverfallenLv1

It's back! I was reading before the repost, glad it's back. The first few chapters feel like a typical isekai, but it gets better as you read further.

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TheWanderingBardLv12

Really nice story/plotline, I love the comedy. Some phrases could be rephrased for clarity but other than that all is good! Looking forward to reading and seeing how this story develops! :D Keep it going author!

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LordSiriusLv11

This is a great book. I love the action and comedy, especially between Mc and Ghost. I hope it keeps getting better as I read through it.

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No_La2Lv4

this is seriously one of the best novels I have read ,but I have a question concerning the romance isn't Ugly demon/ghost male

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Daoist_Little_YunLv13

Reveal spoiler

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MotivatedSlothLv13

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

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OakFlameAuthor

Hello folks! I've got roughly 40 chapters of stockpile, so updates should be consistent! Give it a read for some comedy, adventure, and a protag using uncommon weapons!

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FREAK_Reader01Lv12

Giving this a five star, for no reason"...", am. still curious though,to the Author why do you write? 🤔😳

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