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aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv151yr
2023-04-25 15:41

WRITING STYLE: The author’s writing style is impeccable and quite good. The story is well written, can be easily understood, and is not as confusing as the story goes. Although there may be negligible errors that I have seen, they haven't in any way distracted my attention and immersion in reading. STABILITY OF UPDATES: With the author's current update schedule (4 chapters per week), if the update rate goes up more, I'm sure its readers' anticipation will level up, too. As of now, I think the story is getting better after every chapter. I am just 11 chapters away from the latest chapter which I plan to go through. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The story's pacing, for me, has just the right momentum---not too fast or too slow. The author has taken great consideration in building up this story that it gets more engrossing to read and makes you look forward to the momentous progress of our main character in the story. CHARACTER DESIGN: We have an astute and strong-willed main character here in this story whose progress gets better and more promising in every chapter. Even the side characters being gradually introduced into the fray have their own distinctive roles. WORLD BACKGROUND: The world setting is so descriptively rendered based on the main character's interactions within the game world and with the other game characters, where their respective actions are taking place. This is the second book that I have read in this genre which I am enjoying so far; so keep it up, author. You are absolutely doing a great job.

VRMMORPG: Dragomancer Reborn

Grand_Void_Daoist
4.5
312 Chs

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Xander_Vick
Xander_VickLv13

Havent read yet, but I will when it has more chapters. :)

1yr
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ikka
ikkaLv13

do you know if there will be any romance in this?... because i really hope for a no..

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aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

I think there won't be; as stated in the tags. And that's one of the things that I don't want included in this genre bcs it doesn't fit into the plot.

ikka:do you know if there will be any romance in this?... because i really hope for a no..
1yr
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ikka
ikkaLv13

could not agree more!

aoi_hoshi_cath88:I think there won't be; as stated in the tags. And that's one of the things that I don't want included in this genre bcs it doesn't fit into the plot.
1yr
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ikka
ikkaLv13

bad news... asked the author if there would be any romance in this.. ofc i was hoping for a no..... and he said there would be light romance in this...

aoi_hoshi_cath88:I think there won't be; as stated in the tags. And that's one of the things that I don't want included in this genre bcs it doesn't fit into the plot.
1yr
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aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

if there would be, I would hope it would just be a minor thing or secondary in the extent if it's going to be introduced into the story.

ikka:bad news... asked the author if there would be any romance in this.. ofc i was hoping for a no..... and he said there would be light romance in this...
1yr
ikka
ikkaLv13

Think it would be minor or secondary.. author just said light, because he wasent good at it... and I said then why not, not put it in?... and That was the convo.. he didnt text me back on the not put it in part..

aoi_hoshi_cath88:if there would be, I would hope it would just be a minor thing or secondary in the extent if it's going to be introduced into the story.
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GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Harem?

1yr
aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15

not sure of this but one reader already asked the author if there will be romance in the story; and he had answered YES. For me, as much as possible, if it's fantasy, I don't think it fits to have this into this kind of story.

GreatDaoofspace: Harem?
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GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Agree!!😁

aoi_hoshi_cath88:not sure of this but one reader already asked the author if there will be romance in the story; and he had answered YES. For me, as much as possible, if it's fantasy, I don't think it fits to have this into this kind of story.
1yr
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Jemexoxo123
Jemexoxo123Lv15

Please return soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loving it!!!!!

10mth
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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv13

Here to support a good fellow author and friend on his new book. I haven't read it completely yet, but it does seems to be quite good, it has a constant pace, with almost no breaks, a strong minded and smart main character, and interesting side characters. Grand Void Daoist is already quite experienced in writing Webnovels, so I'm sure he won't dissapoint you with the usual boring cliches, or weak minded, pathetic main characters either. He knows his sh it

1yr

Justin_Gabventure
Justin_GabventureLv13

Experience √ check I Have read Walker Of The Worlds and I absolutely love it.🤩🤣[img=update][img=update][img=update] Give it a try, you will surely be immersed in the beautiful writings of this author I will be awaiting your updates 👍

1yr
Creativityiskey
CreativityiskeyLv14

There’s no question ten out of ten story it’s background update stability writing everything’s perfect but I would like to get chapters faster

1yr
90Bry
90BryLv15

By all that is holy it'll be to soon if I have to read another 'he reckoned' or 'I reckoned'.....ugh.....there are other words!! Use them!! Overall, the story is fairly decent and well-rounded, Definitely wish there were more chapters. Can't wait to see what happens....

1yr
Robbin_Austin
Robbin_AustinLv13

This is a biased review. Grand Void Daoist was the first author whose novels I truly enjoyed and was willing to pay for thus I am giving 5 stars just cause.

1yr
Creativityiskey
CreativityiskeyLv14

I really like this book it’s not to fast but not to slow it has some good detail and just overall pretty good hope you continue this book has amazing potential

1yr
wounded_warrior
wounded_warriorLv14

Read it. . . Just read it, you won't be disappointed I swear!

1yr
KhyaaL
KhyaaLLv13

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to the author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

1yr
Martikus
MartikusLv12

I can FINALLY give this a full five atars as the author has started updating it again :)

3mth
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