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2023-10-29 14:57

There's nothing unique about this book. The writing quality dips after chapter 50 ish when the mc gets the system. Before, he used to calculative and the author would articulate mc's actions realistically. The mc also became dumber so negate the high IQ or genius you see in the tags. If you're into system novels - lazy writing with brain dead mc's, then this your thing. However, if you like questioning the Mc's actions or author's stay away.In addition, if you have read fated villain or any villain with a system where the MC has to kill the heaven's chosen, this is another replica of that. I must say that the novel started well but after chapter 50, author stopped caring about quality.

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