Another teen drama with edgy brainless mc. Writing itself is tedious and cringy. Not to mention mc attitude who seems to have bleeding heart villain troupe. I actually like antihero-villains books but not these with weak mentality and low iq.

Love your other book, Holy Necromancer, am sure this would be great too. I will be awaiting thy updates 👍 Villian √ check Dark √ Check Hehe! 🤩😅🤣[img=recommend][img=update]

Firstly, let me just say that the potential for greatness in this novel is immense! In fact, it could even surpass the quality of your acclaimed Gabriel novel. However, it seems like you're considering taking the safe route by making your protagonist careful and ensuring their triumph. But why not let misfortune have its way and take the story in unexpected directions? After all, misfortune can strike at any moment, catching even the most prepared characters off guard. If you take this daring approach, you run the risk of trashing the "troupe of a winner" trope, which can make for a refreshingly unique storyline. Rather than following the formulaic arc of a successful main character, why not explore the twisted depths of a character like Fang Yuan from Revered Insanity or the Fool of Lotm? These complex and emotionally charged characters could take your novel to the top 3 in no time. Of course, I understand that such a drastic shift in storytelling can be daunting. But with your writing talent and dedication, anything is possible. Even if it takes time to reach the desired outcome, the end result will be worth it. I've been following your work from the beginning and even subscribed, but I must admit that the predictable plot of your previous novel left me disappointed. It's time to challenge yourself and unleash your dark and crazy side to truly showcase your writing abilities. In conclusion, don't shy away from taking risks and embracing misfortune in your writing. By stepping outside of your comfort zone and exploring unconventional character arcs, you have the potential to create a masterpiece that will leave readers begging for more. So let's see what you're capable of!

Story development after 146 is a big no no no! mc supposed to be clever and ruthless and not accepting conditions like to know the road youll need to ear this and do this for me or else youll die... i am out

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I read the Author's Previous book...Holy Necromancer too....and it is one of the top 20~30 for me if not higher...and after reading 3 chapters of this book....i have a feeling that it will be better than the previous one 😋... It has all the tags which i want in a novel..just hoping that there is No Harem like Holy Necromancer 😅 Thanks Authors, I am rooting for you, for winning some prizes🌹🤩

very good, I just hope it doesn't have romance and harem ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

There's nothing unique about this book. The writing quality dips after chapter 50 ish when the mc gets the system. Before, he used to calculative and the author would articulate mc's actions realistically. The mc also became dumber so negate the high IQ or genius you see in the tags. If you're into system novels - lazy writing with brain dead mc's, then this your thing. However, if you like questioning the Mc's actions or author's stay away.In addition, if you have read fated villain or any villain with a system where the MC has to kill the heaven's chosen, this is another replica of that. I must say that the novel started well but after chapter 50, author stopped caring about quality.

interesting and unique plot but the downside is MC hiding his power. atleast make him normal/average in the eyes of the people not just mortal who dont have power. Very dumb setting to make.