Review Detail of Avadonia in I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Item: I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
Rating: 2.6

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AvadoniaLv51yrAvadonia

seem interesting but the story seriously need some editing, it doesn't flow well and even tense seem mixed, unreadable to me if you want to enjoy the read.

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

BLACKangelmarl

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BLACKangelmarlAuthorBLACKangelmarl

Hi, can you tell me how my story doesn't flow well? So that I can improve the story. I will appreciate the good feedback.

1yr