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Avadonia

Avadonia

Lv5
2018-04-26 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia6mth
    Commented

    god this story is pretty good for a quick read but the amount of cliché and super cringe moment is terrible

    Ch 71 71: You Can't Run Away From Me
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    Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon
    Fantasy · Anon22
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia10mth
    Replied to Willys_Wonka

    unless someone move faster than the speed of light, the mind dictate if they can react

    "However, you can also focus on strengthening your body. By absorbing the energy in the atmosphere and fusing it with your body, you can become so fast and so powerful that the other person that trains their mind wouldn't even be able to react to an attack of yours."
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia11mth
    Posted

    translations quality went to shit after the free chapter do not recommend

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    My Runes Can Be Upgraded
    Games · Angry Laugh
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Commented

    it's just a 100% increase speed, it's just twice the result, not half effort lol

    With [Unobstructed Hundred Meridians], no matter what body tempering cultivation technique he practiced, he would be able to get twice the result with half the effort!
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    Cultivation: I Can Add Descriptors To My Body
    Eastern · Heartless
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Commented

    yes you are, you are the best genius there is !

    After a "meow", it held Lin Yuan's hand and said, "Yuan, Chimey is still sleeping. Chimey is a lazy bum. Genius is already awake, Genius is diligent."
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    Fey Evolution Merchant
    Eastern · Amber Button
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Posted

    seem interesting but the story seriously need some editing, it doesn't flow well and even tense seem mixed, unreadable to me if you want to enjoy the read.

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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Posted

    a surprisingly good story even if i had reservation the first few chapter, also a great number of free chapter compared to many other stories

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    My Undeath
    Fantasy · Jhaydun
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Commented

    meh, hope the story catch up, MC is depressing

    Ch 21 Episode 4: To Start Over (6)
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    Levelling by the Sidelines
    Urban · Tamaki_Leon
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Posted

    became quite worse after the free chapter, the character change a lot I almost don't recognize aria, most of the first 60 chapter became quite useless, some function are mentioned 'in passing' only after 45+ chapter too ? the free chapter were nice but I wouldn't recommend spending passes or money on locked chapter

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    Idle Mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Posted

    3 duplicated after each other not fixed after 2 weeks this is pure scam ...

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    Blood Titan System
    Fantasy · Typhlix
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia1yr
    Commented

    holy fuck the MC is cringe as fuck

    Ch 38 Plans going forward
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    IDLE Database
    Sci-fi · Dyrem
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    ace is a genius

    Ch 26 Cat Got His Tongue
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    Monarch of Solitude: Daily Quest System
    Fantasy · Destiny_Aitsuji
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Posted

    This is not gonna be one of those story you follow for month, clearly written by an amateur the story really need an editor, sadly I'd say half of what is written could be removed without the story losing quality.

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    Into the Zombie World
    Urban · Neil_Ads
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    god the long description of the weapon is so useless, feel like 50% of what is written can be skipped without issue, I'm done trying to give a chance to this story

    Ch 24 Demolition Expert
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    Into the Zombie World
    Urban · Neil_Ads
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    the original MC was a coward why didn't he turn then ?

    But there was an exemption. Apocalypse Virus could not directly affect those people who have a strong 'Will'.
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    Into the Zombie World
    Urban · Neil_Ads
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Posted

    trash novel, the starting concept was interesting but character are extremely one dimensional, the story is full of typo, contain some propaganda, start to seem like Chinese cultivation, in the end after 10 chapter, nothing good was found in there... sad the concept seemed interesting

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    I Can Create Perfect Accidents.
    Urban · Comfortably Trippy
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    damn author is definitely a teen to write shit like this lol

    "I will not be weaker than my future girlfriend for long, I will not claim you as my girlfriend until I am stronger than you and we battle it out," he declares seriously.
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    Eye System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    he literally called his sword an iron sword last chapter lol

    At this moment, the scarecrow was not looking at him but at the sword in his hand.
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    I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!
    Fantasy · Laughter and Joy
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    god I tried to give a chance to this novel but it keep getting more cringe

    But this was the first time he had seen a mage!
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    Mage Academy: I Have Infinite Skill Points
    Fantasy · Half-Fated Sir
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  • Avadonia
    Avadonia2yr
    Commented

    yeah dropping here, I wanted a standard OP MC novel but it's solo cringe

    Ch 13 Suddenly, There Was an Ambiguous Atmosphere
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    Starting With 3 S-Class Talents
    Eastern · Heavy Punch Winner
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