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Lektival
LektivalLv41yr
2023-10-09 20:28

My review as of right now. I am currently enjoying this story, as someone who is still making his way through the authors other work, I feel that this story has quite a few concurrent themes between that story and this one, that's not to say its bad, because regardless of a few overused cliches centered on the protagonists looks, they do not detract from the story in any way.I have noticed maybe one or two grammatical faults as or the latest chapter, but none that are immersion breaking as they are very minor. So far, the only part of the story that I'm not overly fond of, is the fact the the protagonists name changes to something that I feel doesn't really flow as well as his original name, which in the grand scheme of things is more of a personal gripe, than a fault with the story because the author explained the reason for the change and the lore behind the new name in a way that keeps it accurate withing the world itself. In conclusion, I'm very much enjoying my time with this story, it's characters are entertaining and it's world interesting.

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