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N_Nelson
N_NelsonLv41yr
2023-03-12 18:03

frankly it was ok at first but the mc is just scattered, it's like he doesn't have a goal and he is not even having any alarm bells and trying to protect his family, frankly it was ok when he was a child but now all he does is teleport and do something with no plan and no tangible goal

Make Love, Not Warcraft: Game of Thrones

Sykocyrus
3.3
61 Chs

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Ben_EZz_Here
Ben_EZz_HereLv13

yeah feel force and just a bunch of context what already happen in th series just added mc and another element

1yr
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201289
201289Lv2

At the exact moment he agreed to lose his memories is when he was out of this garbage, but what a piece of idiot would want to lose his memories, which is what makes him no matter how much he retains his knowledge, I still don't understand why there are authors That they do that, I don't understand what the story wins with that, on the contrary. anyway

1yr

Fito
FitoLv5

well it seemed kind of interesting, but then the mc lost all his memories and then the story turns into the adventures of a kid with superpowers who does a lot of stupid things, it seems funny at times, so far there is no major development of the plot, It seems more like a random idea of ​​the author.

1yr
Johan_The_Monster
Johan_The_MonsterLv2

no point if he loses his memories. it doesn't matter if it's based off the guy from that SP episode if he forgets everything.

1yr
Ecokane
EcokaneLv11

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Mohamed_ibrahim
Mohamed_ibrahimLv2

The story is more like crack fic than an actual story the MC is too idiotic. The people around are too 1 dimensional and there is no sense of depth to the story.

1yr
Arion_Sturmklinge
Arion_SturmklingeLv2

Not bad, but I still would prefer if you focus more on his leveling and is powers . If possible a bit more interaction with the other characters.

1yr
Saiyan_Of_God
Saiyan_Of_GodLv4

Mc Without a Goal, no memories of the plot or what he is supposed to do, useless Op for no reason at all. .................................................................

1yr
OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15

This is a crack-fic. If that's your thing then you may enjoy this............................................................................................

1yr
Sagvey_Ay
Sagvey_AyLv2

can he make his own golem soldiers? (and it would be very nice for daenerys to marry the charming wizard prince[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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