An interesting and captivating story, with good dialogue and history in terms of potential, but I sincerely ask you not to forget the other work, my life as a monster
Forsakenneel
Liked it!
LIKEI understand, I'm trying to develop a story slowly but I don't know which way to go, so sorry for the inconvenience and take all the time you need to think, we'll be waiting
Forsakenneel:yea I am trying to get back to writing it but I have a severe case of writers block in terms of where I want the story to go. in all honesty I made mistakes writing it that led to so many branching paths that I've forgotten and I ended up writing myself into a corner.