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Sakkaku_no_mori
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new ancient family and magic? not u find anywhere... i just hope u don't make mc create rasengan and we good. but this is well make fic and absolutely no rasengan... transmigrate but sealed memory. got a lot of potential as long as u dont create rasengan [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet

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CafeconLeche
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has read many chinese novels 😨

Segsy_Deadpool
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Seems like bro got trauma reading some fic with mc creating Rasengan

ALEX1402
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Yeah having something like that makes no sense here. Maybe author can try something like consecutive concentric shields , wandless flight, portals, spells similar to fieldfyre with other elements, or ancient magic from games where they manipulate weather.