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ChellyArks
ChellyArksLv21yr
2023-03-09 14:40

Good show The writing here is great. The atmosphere the author creates shows a detail that is usually absent from other works. I'd like to see where this goes

Sanguis et Os

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Dubyas
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Im really flattered you think so. It feels great to have such a positive review from a fantasy novelist who's work is really well done.

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This book is a gem in the making... I usually try to find faults in the books I read, but I just couldn't find any here, making it such an enjoyable experience The storytelling? Superb... Grammar? Impeccable... Punctuation? On point... Plot? Unique enough to make me keep scrolling... Pacing? One of the best I've seen so far in a book. Apart from an irregular release, it is very good, and I'd love to see more of this soon. Keep up the good work, Author 👍

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Masterful first five chapters, and if the author can keep this up, I’m sticking around! It’s hard to find such quality writing on WN. This reads easily and has a natural flow. The characters’ thoughts become my thoughts, and I can easily feel immersed in the story. There is virtually no dialogue in the first few chapters, and usually that’s my favorite feature in a story, but this is every bit as engaging for me. And when it does appear, combined with the insightful inner dialogue, it’s clever and really helps establish the characters. I appreciate the lack of info dump! It’s so easy to rush and explain everything about a fantasy world in the beginning. But so far, details about the world are being worked in gradually. Much easier to digest and become familiar with without feeling lost or overwhelmed. Honestly, I have no idea where the plot is going from here. The tags feel accurate. I get the adventure/revenge vibe, a variety of races and roles and abilities to be explored… …But Author has earned enough trust in his abilities that I can recommend keeping an eye in this story. It will either be a huge success, or a tragically hidden gem. Either way, I think it’s worth reading. Good luck!

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A very wonderful story sprinkled with good grammar and vocabulary. I think it has potential minding that the author is experienced. The flow of the story and its pace is just right. I am impressed with the narration nonetheless! Good luck and God bless! [img=recommend]

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Loving the scenery so much and the attention to detail💜

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This is an amazing story but I don't know why the author stop updating it.

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Young_Master_Jay
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MOREEEEEEE. Author, seriously, you did a very good job. Will be adding this on my library. I have nothing to say. This novel is perfect. The grammar, the world building, the character. Sheeeeet! This is my kind of book.

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A captivating story, with vivid descriptions, good grammar, smooth story development and good pacing. From the beginning, it is full of the MC's emotions, the need to survive, anger and burning revenge. Although we don't know the name of the MC yet, and hopefully we will in a few more chapters, the first person point of view is well done, enough to help us immerse ourselves in the world of the characters from the very beginning. Keep going, author! [img=recommend]

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Only three chapters and I definitely want to keep reading more of this story. It's a fantastic theme to get hooked on. I love your style. Keep writing.

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I was thoroughly impressed with the author's writing style. The way the story unfolded through the author's descriptive and vivid language kept me hooked until the very last sentence. I particularly enjoy this genre, and this book was no exception. The well-crafted main character made it stand out from other books in the genre. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys more of a darker novel, or to anyone looking for a gripping read with superb writing. It is a must-read for any book lover.

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