Dubyas

Thank you for the extremely thorough and well written review. I hope that my writing will reach more people and inspire them to write as well, but keeping a small audience is just as gratifying. Happy Reading.

Thank you for the very enthusiastic and genuine review. Your admiration is well appreciated and inspires me to write further. Happy Reading.

Thank you for your kind and helpful review. I appreciate longer reviews like this that help me pinpoint what I am doing correctly. Happy Reading.

Thank you for the concise and pleasant review. Your support is well appreciated. Happy Reading.

Thank you for your concise and kind review. I will do my best to continue updating the story. Happy Reading.

A very interesting story. I enjoyed the background and setting. The author has a bright future ahead of them should they decide to keep writing. Writing quality: The first two chapters are written very well, though I would suggest that the author try to keep the same quality consistent throughout their story. Stability of updates: It's only 5 chapters for now, so I can't say much here, but it does seem like it's updated regularly. Story development: Though it feels a bit rushed at times, the author has a strong sense of moving the story along at an engaging and thrilling pace. Character design: Though we are introduced to the characters early, they all feel very unique and thought out. I would recommend that the author take extra time to detail their characters throughout the story, but again, the novel is it it's early stages. World background: A very nice take on a fantasy world. Magic feels grounded and logical and gives a low-mid fantasy feeling throughout. Overall, a very enjoyable read. I wish the author the best of luck as they continue writing. Happy reading.

An unpolished description, not quite as gruesome as I had in mind. Apologies if it does not suffice.

Reality is often sobering.

A good surprise. Thank you for your friendly review, the errors you pointed out, and the suggestions you gave. I will strive to work harder and live up to the expectations. Happy writing.

Thank you for the wonderful review. While this is my first novel, I am flattered you think it can go far. Happy writing.