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Darkest_Sage
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Hey :) I spent a lot of time polishing the prose and making sure there weren't any grammar mistakes, so you know it's going to be a smooth read. And the characters? They're so real you'll feel like you know them personally. I made sure to give them each their own unique quirks and personalities, so you'll be invested in their lives from the first chapter. The plot is tightly woven and full of twists and turns that feel natural and earned. I wanted to keep you guessing, but I didn't want anything to feel contrived. I think I struck the perfect balance between unpredictability and inevitability. Overall, I'm really proud of it, and I think you're going to love it. If you're looking for a well-written story that will keep you engaged from beginning to end, this is it!

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So far your 'story' is a blatant copy of 'Path of Ruin' available on spacebattles. I dont know if you have some changes planned or if you would keep on shamelessly copying another person's work like creatively bankrupt xerox machine. But anyway I hope you improve and atleast credit the person and the work you are copying from.

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