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Believe It! Motherfucker!

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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername21d
    Replied to Jmechan21

    i think even the entity would get shafted in 40k

    The being replied, "Well, it's too late now. I've already selected the world; there's no going back."
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    Naruto: Uchiha with a Save Point
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername5mth
    Replied to DesMark

    read it. it is one of the few bright spots in the current desolate era of boruto

    'Shape manipulation is really hard, I wonder how Minato was able to create the Rasengan without prior instructions.' Hikaru thought he hadn't really given his all to mastering the Rasengan but instead, he was using it to train his shape manipulation.
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    Naruto: A Different Time
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername7mth
    Commented
    I cackle quietly "The house of Dagoth is a path to many abilities, some might consider... unnatural"
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername11mth
    Replied to Wolf_Anders
    "Hey mister that wasn't very gentlemanly of you ya know." A lewd smile began to creep onto Ava's face as she looked up at Alex. "You'll have to kiss it to make it feel better, but owww my pussy hurts too, so kiss that as mmmpf—-"
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    Nuclear Winter
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername1yr
    Replied to Darkest_Sage

    So far your 'story' is a blatant copy of 'Path of Ruin' available on spacebattles. I dont know if you have some changes planned or if you would keep on shamelessly copying another person's work like creatively bankrupt xerox machine. But anyway I hope you improve and atleast credit the person and the work you are copying from.

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    republished*****
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername1yr
    Posted

    I like your work. Some of your stories are not that well written. Some characters are poorly designed. Their motives flawed and their relationships feel wrong to me. But I see small but consistent improvement through all your fics, which is much appreciated. I love the cyberpunk genre specifically the dark future storyline by Mike Pondsmith. After seeing your past works, I hope this fic will be at least on par with them, if not better than your past fics.

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    Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername1yr
    Posted

    I have read many fanfictions and webnovels in my 8 year long journey as a reader and man of culture but I have never quite read a story so torturous and mind-numbingly slow as this one. I dont know why I continue to read this shit and I dont think I want to know why. Despite all that the writing quality, grammar, world building and progression is top notch. I would recommend this fiction to only those who have sufficient amounts of patience and slight masochistic tendencies. I hope the condition this story is in, improves in the near future as otherwise I see this story becoming nothing but another boring longfic lacking entertainment.

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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to St_Pat

    okay, can you explain?

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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
    Anime & Comics · NotAProperUsername
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to Ethanma

    😅 was that sarcasm?

    "Hiruzen Sarutobi, and these are Danzo Shimura and Mei Terumi. Why are you pursuing us?"
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to OllieZ

    that is true but then they are shinobi, they cheat, lie, and achieve their goals to any means possible. and the mc is no way responsible for the credibility of the exam. they wanted to help, so they helped they received help from their friends, so they did

    Ch 27 Proposal
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to OllieZ

    it was never mc's decision alone. plus just because he is strong enough to pass the exam by himself does not mean he will have to do so

    Ch 27 Proposal
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to Ethanma

    would you disclose your real name to a stranger who had been stalking you for reasons unknown?

    "Hiruzen Sarutobi, and these are Danzo Shimura and Mei Terumi. Why are you pursuing us?"
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Commented

    ah, the wonders of empathy nice chapter, you came clean with mc's psyche, now you can build upon that good base for future development. thanks for posting

    Ch 46 Unburdening
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    Naruto: Reborn As An Inuzuka... Kinda?
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to Ferus1

    is it in ff.net?

    Ch 26 Test of Survival
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
    Anime & Comics · NotAProperUsername
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to stefanus101

    yes

    Ch 8 A Leaf Holding Dreams
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to N3wman

    new chapter released!

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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to Chin1234

    do so

    Ch 26 Test of Survival
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to mutekishifu

    lol I can neither confirm nor deny this statement 😅

    Ch 26 Test of Survival
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to _Immortal_Panda_

    Ch 26 Test of Survival
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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  • NotAProperUsername
    NotAProperUsername3yr
    Replied to Electrum_Eli

    yes

    Ch 26 Test of Survival
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    The Random Reincarnation of An Average Guy
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