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Logi_cal
Logi_calLv41yr
2023-03-06 21:43

Read at you own risk. It starts good i will give it that but soon after it becomes cringe.

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mow
mowLv4

Cringe? How so?

Nightskin_Mystic
Nightskin_MysticLv14

The Mc is kind of dumb and will fo some cringe stuff like I'm at chapter 18 yeah the Mc is kind of cringe not going to lie I'll keep reading to see if he gets better.

mow:Cringe? How so?
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

quit repeating the word cringe and explain how its cringe. You make it sound like you dont even know the meaning of the word

Nightskin_Mystic:The Mc is kind of dumb and will fo some cringe stuff like I'm at chapter 18 yeah the Mc is kind of cringe not going to lie I'll keep reading to see if he gets better.
Divine_Booster
Divine_BoosterLv1

Is it something like 'MC let some people die so the world can develop' thing ? some excuse some author used because they are lazy to change the plot?

Nightskin_Mystic:The Mc is kind of dumb and will fo some cringe stuff like I'm at chapter 18 yeah the Mc is kind of cringe not going to lie I'll keep reading to see if he gets better.
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I agree

InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

You think people own you an explanation? lol you are out of your mind. Going by your avatar picture you probably look like this irl.

Unpaid_FoxGod:quit repeating the word cringe and explain how its cringe. You make it sound like you dont even know the meaning of the word
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

and ngl using my dp to try to insult me? are you seriously doing that in a community like this? grow up what do you think this is? face book? a place where i should use my actual face rather than a anonymous one like a drawing?

InternetSaint:You think people own you an explanation? lol you are out of your mind. Going by your avatar picture you probably look like this irl.
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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

I am not impressed.

Unpaid_FoxGod:and ngl using my dp to try to insult me? are you seriously doing that in a community like this? grow up what do you think this is? face book? a place where i should use my actual face rather than a anonymous one like a drawing?
Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

was i trying to? how narcissistic of you

InternetSaint:I am not impressed.
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RustyBoi
RustyBoiLv4

THIS IS THAT FIC??? No wonder i instantly dropped it and removed it from my library so i don’t accidentally reread it

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