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Panboakiba
PanboakibaLv132yr
2023-04-18 20:43

This has the greatest potential I have seen in such a long time in such a novel. well balanced (Idk about the updating stability as I just started reading). The character is true to what was written and doesn't alternate as fast as others do. The world is the casual Chinese cultivation urban what not with common sense that seems to be in favour of the villain. The female harem members although little and not having much time to explain different aspects to them have slow but sure development to them. (I have a liking to yandere don't question). There are rare occasional writing mistakes (like gender, missing words causing the sentence to turn out like a cheap Chinese translation novel) but then again these mistakes are rare and doesn't affect the overall story. An I hope this is frequent and doesn't get cancelled .

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DaoistMyDmZx
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The story is decent, but the author is only interested in getting interaction/subscriptions and once that slows down due to the slow updates/uninteresting filler chapters they drop and make a new book. This book is already essentially dropped from what I was said in the most recent chapter.

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DogLickerGods
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