How to create a good novel villain? It's hard and easy. You have to balance the good and evil in the characters you write. You also can't make the villain too stupid, but not too smart either. Because a villain who is too perfect will bore the reader quickly. Sometimes something annoying can make the reader more motivated to read your work. That's something I've learned after reading many villain novels. But of course everyone's opinion is different, some of them may like cold-blooded and intelligent villains like I don't know who it is. Sorry but the villain in this book are comedic and not too serious. And before reading this book, you should put aside your bias against Chinese novels. Although it's not a Chinese novel, the plot I used will probably make you feel like it's a Chinese novel. My writing style is also like a Chinese author, because I can't help but be influenced after reading many Chinese novels. I like it, I enjoy writing novels in this style. Besides entertaining me, it also keeps me from getting bored quickly. Please bear with me while reading this book, because I'm also trying not to irritate you too much, especially people who often meow because the plot is familiar with Chinese novels or something like that. This is my work, not anyone else's. The plot may be familiar, but the monologue and dialog are obviously different because they're coming straight out of my brain. Only a few quotes I often use from Chinese novels, such as "dog licker", "green", "melon eater" and others to describe the situation. Of course it's not much and won't make your eyes hurt. In the first 2 chapters you may not like the MC, but if you read up to 10 chapters more. You will see that the MC has gotten better, I deliberately made the MC's character development fast. The MC has a good life and will bully his enemies with various devious plans. So don't worry and just read.

So In Summary This Is DXD Without Devils,Gods And Magic But A DXD Cultivation Novel

Very simple and basic story, just fast-food for the brain, author acknowledges this. Generally, when it comes to this type of cliche story I just rate it 3's across the board and leave it with the afterword that it's enjoyable if you just shut your brain off... EXCEPT... I'm giving Story Development a 5 because this is NTRing Issei and I'm always in support of Issei NTR (Issei is the worst MC in a story I have ever seen).

Bro, Setidaknya lanjutkan novelmu yang lain sebelum menulis yang satu ini.. Tapi tetap saja saya yakin novel ini memiliki potensi yang sama atau bahkan lebih daripada yang sebelumnya, saya juga sangat menantikan yang ini karena novel ini mempunyai konsep yang sama seperti yang sebelumnya. Pokoknya semangat! Jangan jatuhkan yang satu ini seperti yang sebelumnya!

There is literally a novel similiar to this called "scammed by the creator" in watpad involving Riser and pretty much the same scenario without the voice heart

Hopefully this book will be good that way if the other one gets dropped I have something to read.

i read a WB chinees (Villain: eavesdropping, the heroines are so beautiful ~400ch~ ) and the start is copy..... But in this, the Mc don't like the plot and don't regresse 10 times. Please make your best to create a good young master.👍 Hhooooo author can you make auther plot in this world like your auther FF this will be more good (my opinion).....👌

Well, it's been a few days since I read this fanfic and I must say that I'm hooked by the narrative! I ended up forgetting to post a review, but I suppose better late than never. This fanfic reminds me a lot of another Novel, especially with regard to reading the minds of the 'heroines', I'm not remembering the name of the Novel at the moment, but it ends up not mattering so much, because it's a fun fanfic to read. ... I'm waiting for Young Master Riser to reach the top, while the peasant/Issei courts death while wallowing in despair, and contemplates that everything he owns or tries to own will end in failure.

Entertaining story I like the mc the way his character being a funny villian/protagonist The plot is good so please dont stop this story its a amazing story.