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WarlockMagus
WarlockMagusLv141yr
2023-02-21 18:31

The start is really good I hope you continue this work. I hope you make the mc travel to all lands and find magic that he can use to strengthen himself his dragon and his family that he trusts. I haven't seen anyone try to unite the whole world into 1 empire and try to improve the world by getting rid of any current or future threats permanently. Also it will be really good if mc adds schools for commoners and improves hygiene and pregnancy births that are common sense in the modern world. Also dragons will grow more quickly with exercise, good diet and be free to roam around and not be locked up when they are old enough to fly and hunt.

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Pretending_Author
4.4
130 Chs

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WarlockMagus
WarlockMagusLv14

You don't have to follow my advice I said all that to give you ideas. All I want is for you to carry on this story I will give all my power stones to this story from now on. so please don't drop it.

1yr
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DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

this novel is very fun to read and i expect a lot from it. The character is very much alive and I'm Happy danny finds someone she truly love and have a happy ending also the the mc is fun character and my only hope is to see the mc harem increase, so far there are only one who is officially confirmed while the other one is still in the middle. I recommend people reading this novel. English is not my mother tongue so i not good enough to write in order to express how i like this novel . I hope the author commit and finish this novel because i will start give stone show my support [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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InvictusKyrielight
InvictusKyrielightLv4

I have only good things to say about this fic, in first place a protagonist that is not a maniacal "monster" for no good reason, he don't treat his life as a book or show, or something equally pathetic, but at the same time he is in no way a pushover, one of the most notable things about this author in general is the way he build characters, many harem stories fall in the pitfall of collecting hollow characters, every relevant woman in this story have their own personalitiy and motive, no one fells two dimensional, some characters are simply delusional/stupid(I'm looking at you Daemon) something that is completely realistic(real life never lack dumb people), this is actualy one of the few contexts were a harem actualy makes sense. So, good job and thanks for your effort, don't let any "trolls" desmotivate you, keep going and good luck.

1yr
201289
201289Lv2

I'm out I said from the beginning that if the old king was not his real father he was out, the novel is called son of the unworthy referring to the old king, in this last chapter at the wedding you confirm that he is not his father when you say that Daeneris was taken away to the altar for Aemon, the dragon knight, who "totally is not our true father", so goodbye what a waste of my time, could I have prayed for you to constantly insinuate that he was not the son of the previous king that is totally unnecessary in the story, Anyway, I'm tired of so many insinuations, good luck to you, goodbye.

1yr
the_kings_bastard
the_kings_bastardLv1

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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

A great start to a GOT story. This review is definitely too soon but I scrolled across this gem today and im very excited to see how this story plays out. I've become a fan of musically inclined MCs I've realized and that may play into my excitement at finding such a story. speaking of, the MC's powers are great and fit well within this worlds mechanics. I like the light hearted feel the story has so far and I like how unique the origin is, especially weaving daenerys into it quite naturally. Im a fan of the MC's personality and mindset as well. he's very open and I think its an intelligent move being friendly and caring to his relatives and those deserving, slowly cultivating his own faction, family, and eventual army within his own giant extended and very dangerous household. I've got great hopes for this story already and I would definitely suggest giving it a read.

1yr
xKitetsu
xKitetsuLv4

Reading your other GOT fic I knew this would be good, though it’s still early this has me interested, keep it up!

1yr
Vridragor
VridragorLv4

It's a really good read. I personally would be very happy to see this continue. please don't give up halfway it's very good. The story keeps me very interested in this. What's gonna happen please do continue writing this.

1yr
Marmora
MarmoraLv6

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Quatavalon_Perry_3214
Quatavalon_Perry_3214Lv4

So far so good. I didn't expect for dragons to be brought this early especially in the era of when the dragons just went extinct, but I'm still digging the story, plus I love that Daenerys is along for the ride. Since there's clearly music going to be involved, (thank you by the way for going a different route) I thank it would be wonderful if he teaches people how to play the instruments just so he can have a theme song when he completing in tourneys.

1yr
anubis1650
anubis1650Lv5

Not a bad start I will really have to wait for more chapters to really give it a true review. I do like the premise and the gifts the MC has are not bad at all though it does depend on how intelligent and educated the MC is to tell if I'm going to really like this story premise though. I do have my small doubts mostly because I have a very bad opinion of Daenerys Targaryen after she tried to start trying to be a ruler. In my opinion after she started trying to rule slaver's Bay her character took a real nosedive from being an incompetent ruler then a I know best ruler to finally mad

1yr
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